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Offline Dan

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Angry man (new avatar)

on: October 01, 2005, 11:24:22 am
So here is my angry man. Just a head - i might do the body but it might be a long time until i do.



Critique please :D

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Re: Angry man (new avatar)

Reply #1 on: October 01, 2005, 11:54:51 am
Fill eye with darker color. If eye needs a specular, use the white to put a spot there... lighten teeth outlines. Your character has absolutely no skull in back. Humans have ovoid skulls when viewed from the top, so you need more skull material in the back. The ear would then be about center from a side on perspecive. Your outline color is well shaded in some areas, and poorly in others: You neglected to use your selout effect below the bridge of  the nose and further below on the right side... excelletn texture and contour from the grimace that follows to the cheek bone. Just needs a few touches more!