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Re: Rabbit/Hare

Reply #10 on: December 16, 2006, 04:27:41 pm
Thanks Skull :)

Has anyone got any crits on improving this?(Bearing in mind that I went for a simple style)

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Re: Rabbit/Hare

Reply #11 on: December 16, 2006, 07:29:32 pm
Has anyone got any crits on improving this?(Bearing in mind that I went for a simple style)

AA and/or selout. Also clean up some of the shading, especially on his ears, it's far too randomly placed. Also, i think more definition with the whites would look good.

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Re: Rabbit/Hare

Reply #12 on: December 16, 2006, 07:37:16 pm
Added AA :)

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Re: Rabbit/Hare

Reply #13 on: December 16, 2006, 09:00:09 pm
i made a quick edit yesterday, i dont know if it will help.



colours got darkened when saved to png, dont know what else to save in but you get the idea..

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Re: Rabbit/Hare

Reply #14 on: December 16, 2006, 09:03:22 pm
Thanks Jamie, but I was going for a non-dithered simplistic style but I might make a more detailed style :)

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Re: Rabbit/Hare

Reply #15 on: December 16, 2006, 11:28:44 pm
I didn't mean AA the outside..

Jamie's palette is quite nice, adds alot of life.

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Re: Rabbit/Hare

Reply #16 on: December 16, 2006, 11:34:24 pm
 :o  :o


Is that what you meant? ???

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Reply #17 on: December 16, 2006, 11:39:55 pm
I didn't mean AA the outside..

Jamie's palette is quite nice, adds alot of life.

That's weird considering i never changed the colours, only one of the darkest browns by a tiny bit.

Edit - i put both side by side and colour picked, and some colours are slightly diffrent values but not by alot barely noticeable i thoght (plus could of got changed a bit when saving?)
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Re: Rabbit/Hare

Reply #18 on: December 16, 2006, 11:40:35 pm
That's weird considering i never changed the colours, only one of the darkest browns by a tiny bit.

 :lol:

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Re: Rabbit/Hare

Reply #19 on: December 17, 2006, 12:15:18 am
To me it seems you added a colour with a far redder hue in there..

If not, you used the colours more effectively.