AuthorTopic: [Wip] Pirate Penguin - Updated 12/14/06!!! - Second update today!  (Read 6371 times)

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Re: [Wip] Pirate Penguin - Updated 12/13/06!!!

Reply #10 on: December 14, 2006, 10:18:27 pm
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Re: [Wip] Pirate Penguin - Updated 12/14/06!!! - Finished?

Reply #11 on: December 14, 2006, 10:39:10 pm
Try getting the penguin's beak more in perspective
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The beak shouldn't be going down but rather facing towards the viewer. also try to add mote contrasts between your shades (the shades on the beak in particular)

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Re: [Wip] Pirate Penguin - Updated 12/14/06!!! - Second update today!

Reply #12 on: December 15, 2006, 05:17:09 am
fixed the beak and up the contrast of a couple things.  I'm gona up the contrast of the beak and feet next version.  I just realized theyre kinda dull looking... lol.