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[CC] Gargoyles

on: September 27, 2018, 10:24:54 pm
1st one is supposed to be an "easter egg"
2nd and 3rd are different angles of view of the same gargoyle
« Last Edit: September 28, 2018, 01:58:45 am by EndarRaven »

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Re: [CC] Gargoyles

Reply #1 on: September 28, 2018, 01:56:45 am
Redrew 1st one

« Last Edit: September 28, 2018, 08:17:15 am by EndarRaven »

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Re: [CC] Gargoyles

Reply #2 on: September 28, 2018, 03:00:33 am
Cool design. Castlevania-like bg tiles?

Anatomy needs loads of work, when you've tightened this up the shadows play to that as well. Right now there's a load of banding (shadows are following the outlines but not the form) on the gargoyle guy, I think I can point to that as part of the problem.

Will drop an edit here + more to this post in a bit.

EDIT:



So here it is. It's been a while...but you can see it in action.

You're on point with your redraw of the 1st one, just tighten up the banding a bit more, cut out some colors and you won't have a problem revamping the 2nd. Edit has some anatomy pointers but it's hella rough and off in parts so I'd advise using proper reference.
« Last Edit: October 04, 2018, 10:08:50 am by pistachio »

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Re: [CC] Gargoyles

Reply #3 on: October 05, 2018, 09:35:35 am
« Last Edit: October 06, 2018, 06:35:36 am by EndarRaven »

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Re: [CC] Gargoyles

Reply #4 on: October 08, 2018, 09:54:45 am
WIP
trying figure out how limbs will look from side, before coloring/shading them
doest it looks right? or anatomy is messed up?
*front view for reference

« Last Edit: October 08, 2018, 10:50:27 am by EndarRaven »

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Re: [CC] Gargoyles

Reply #5 on: October 08, 2018, 12:24:43 pm
I think for this pose, the back should be more sloped than you've drawn it in side-view. This also means the lower abs in the front view should be darker, so show they're further away and in shadow.

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Re: [CC] Gargoyles

Reply #6 on: October 08, 2018, 02:50:40 pm
im liking this alot man , would you make the eyes glow

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Re: [CC] Gargoyles

Reply #7 on: October 10, 2018, 11:53:47 am
Dunno what to do with wing, its looks flat



UPD:
« Last Edit: October 10, 2018, 02:43:14 pm by EndarRaven »

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Re: [CC] Gargoyles

Reply #8 on: October 10, 2018, 02:19:32 pm
Added glow eyes (03 choices), and some greek flare
idk if I fixed the wing or made it worse :/

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Re: [CC] Gargoyles

Reply #9 on: October 11, 2018, 06:07:04 am
Looks finished to me
Any critique?
« Last Edit: October 11, 2018, 06:10:18 pm by EndarRaven »