oh rerg what are we going to do with you, I admire your determaination cus ya jst keep comin back all ears willin to learn each week

Your original looks hard to make out because your colour schemes doesn't make the slightest of sense, everything clashes.. You've AAed a black line with a really dark green, each pixel should be placed for a reason..

Well er yeah I know this is monsoon's linework so don't claim it your own, I like your colour choices, just maybe a bit more change in the Hues.. This isn't colour by numbers so don't feel the need to stick within the lines, I went a bit crazy with AAing this, plus I couldn't help colouring this in
