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[nudity] Random girl [WIP]

on: December 04, 2006, 01:59:40 pm

I want to make sure the lineart is perfect before moving on to the coloring.
C+C and edits are welcomed.
« Last Edit: December 13, 2006, 01:44:26 am by Helm »

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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #1 on: December 04, 2006, 11:18:30 pm
All I can tell is that anatomy is a little messed. But I don't really know how to fix it.

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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #2 on: December 05, 2006, 09:28:58 am
I could've sworn I replied to this ... must've been to harsh ...

it was something along the lines of me feeling sorry for the elephant, with which I meant to sayt
that her legs are to stubby/thick

the upper part of her body could work, but the legs need to be at least 1.5x as long and perhaps more
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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #3 on: December 05, 2006, 08:27:14 pm
Well, edited a lot after Ryu helped me.

But now I can't decide were she's leaning her waist to. Number 1 or 2?

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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #4 on: December 05, 2006, 09:05:35 pm
yeah I agreed.. strech her out really much...
unless ur trying to reach chibi format :D
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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #5 on: December 05, 2006, 10:39:01 pm
she's still a bit too chunky, its really the thickness of her legs, and those lines under the knees just add the illustion of fat-ness.. also her knees are too low.. Her face looked a tad bit too wide, and her right breasts just looked a bit odd, made some quick edits if it helps.. Also changed the face a bit, if it helps at all..



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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #6 on: December 05, 2006, 10:40:35 pm
you're actually wrong about the knee. Unless you aren't going by the golden ratio. ???

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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #7 on: December 05, 2006, 11:25:06 pm
really?? im meaning 'her' right knee should it not be..



definately lower than the other.. didnt mean to say her 'knees are too low', meant to say 'knee's too low'  :P
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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #8 on: December 05, 2006, 11:27:53 pm
I can't deal with these super-deformed anatomy issues, but I can rightly tell you all of the variations thus far are off in terms of center of gravity. She's leaning back too much.

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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #9 on: December 06, 2006, 12:35:44 am
Don't worry about pose, make her superdeformed!!!!!!!!

Modern artists are told that they must create something totally original-or risk being called "derivative".They've been indoctrinated with the concept that bad=good.The effect is always the same: Meaningless primitivism
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