AuthorTopic: [nudity] Random girl [WIP]  (Read 8809 times)

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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #10 on: December 06, 2006, 01:11:13 am
lol, I just noticed that her breasts kept her balance in the first version. (kind of like a big cat's tail does!) 

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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #11 on: December 06, 2006, 03:33:39 am
I personally like the chunky versions with thick legs. It doesn't make sense for her to have such massive breasts and skinny legs and hips. You just need to define her features more, like the musclar curves of her legs.

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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #12 on: December 12, 2006, 07:14:45 pm
Progress showing.


I'll add clothes later. It will help hiding the anatomy errors.

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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #13 on: December 12, 2006, 07:15:35 pm
Yep. That's a camel toe, alright.
que faire quand on a tout fait, tout lu, tout bu, tout mangé
tout donné en vrac et en détail
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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #14 on: December 12, 2006, 09:07:02 pm
I'd say actually, these are genitals. And on that note, please try to provide some critique and not dubious one-liners, Akzidenz.

Now that's it's shaded, the semi-animesque face (with nose you ought to fix) on the midget body is extremely offputting in my opinion. Though the shading is competent, the anatomy needs work! Don't try to hide things, work on them! Work on your anatomical skills on a non-deformed style and you'll see it will help with the deformed stuff too.

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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #15 on: December 12, 2006, 09:36:44 pm
I'd say actually, these are genitals. And on that note, please try to provide some critique and not dubious one-liners, Akzidenz.

You say that as if I never try to critique or offer up advice.

Certainly you permit yourself to a one-liner every now and again, no?
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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #16 on: December 12, 2006, 10:07:29 pm
You say that as if I never try to critique or offer up advice.

Certainly you permit yourself to a one-liner every now and again, no?

Yes I do, but not when it is 'that's a camel-toe alright'. If you have more to say on the subject, please send me a PM and I'll be glad to read your thoughts. Let's not derail the thread any further.

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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #17 on: December 12, 2006, 10:10:18 pm
I dislike the hair - It looks like it takes a solid form. Also, the thighs are a bit too thick and un-feminine.

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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #18 on: December 12, 2006, 11:34:30 pm
Her right hand looks too small. I like the shading you've done.
Modern artists are told that they must create something totally original-or risk being called "derivative".They've been indoctrinated with the concept that bad=good.The effect is always the same: Meaningless primitivism
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Re: Random girl [WIP]

Reply #19 on: December 13, 2006, 12:08:25 am
I'd say this thread deserves a nudity warning now with that last colored one.