[WIP] [Feedback] My D&D Character

[White_Crow]

Hi Rydin, thank you! My character's name is Famir and he's an half elf Warlock. He's the remake (a reboot to be honest) of the old character I created when I was a little teenager.
And yep, you are completely right, the second pictures shows exactly the pose in which I draw him and with the same kind of cloak. But that's exactly why I think that it's hard to draw something like that, because I don't know how I should recreate those folds and everything else! So these days I tried to rework on it, in some ways, and here it's the result:

I'm sure there's a lot of mistakes, not being consinstent in art brings to this (there's always 6 months or so between my "drawings".. And I started 2 years ago), but I kinda like it.

[Rydin]

You should pixel out his character sheet 

This new version has a very consistent light source.

My biggest complaint is Famir's ear seems to be sticking way out.

[White_Crow]

That's a nice idea, I could try it, just for fun.
You are probably right, I wanted to let the others notice the pointy ears so he didn't like like a normal human.. But maybe is a detail too small to put it in the sprite.

[eishiya]

I think the ear would be fine if it wasn't so bright. It should be in shadow, since the rest of the head would block most of the torch-light.

[White_Crow]

You know what? You are 100% right. I totally forgot to modify it.. Thank you.