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Building Cross Section [CC]

on: July 19, 2018, 04:53:32 pm
Building cross section.  Looking for any feedback, except note that this is for tilemap for a game so that is why I don't think I can do the ceiling tiles in true 1 point perspective.



Planning on adding more to the building (elevator, stairs, more than 1 room a floor) but wanted to get the frame down.
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Re: Building Cross Section [CC]

Reply #1 on: July 19, 2018, 06:51:42 pm
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Re: Building Cross Section [CC]

Reply #2 on: July 19, 2018, 07:39:10 pm
Hiding the ceilings looks better :D

The ceilings look very thick, is there a reason for that?

I'm having a hard time reading the scale of this building. Are the windows small or large? Is the brown thing in the middle a footstool or a table?

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Re: Building Cross Section [CC]

Reply #3 on: July 19, 2018, 07:48:43 pm
Thanks for the comments.

I do need the spaces in between the ceilings—very important for the game.

For the ceilings do you mean the space between the floors or the off-white pixels going between?  I can make the spaces between the floors smaller, I was just keeping them to one tile size to make it easy.

Understandable on hard to tell the scale, does adding the people help you?
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Re: Building Cross Section [CC]

Reply #4 on: July 20, 2018, 01:01:43 am
I meant the purple space between floors.

The rooms are very, very tall.