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Offline Zwoosh_bosh

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[wip] A Tragic home for a doll

on: June 27, 2018, 04:21:09 am

Ok, I realy love this! But i want some criticism. Is it appealing? 
The character can put on mask's and can change into a certain person or entente with a mask.
so when he changes mask's his body is a projection of the mask's person or entente. so when he changes mask's
there soul goes back to the mask,
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Re: [wip] A Tragic home for a doll

Reply #1 on: June 28, 2018, 05:07:00 am
yeah I'd say that sells the idea fairly well. I'd maybe try to make it a bit clearer though, colorwise. Maybe have it start glowing a solid color, a-la a pokeball effect? Would make them shrinking up and growing out of the mask more of a clear thing, imo
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Re: [wip] A Tragic home for a doll

Reply #2 on: June 30, 2018, 03:14:59 am

Ok, How is this I Think I need to do a better transition with the color but what do you think
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Re: [wip] A Tragic home for a doll

Reply #3 on: June 30, 2018, 06:13:37 am
x4 
All mask transformation's are done. Do you guy's like them?
« Last Edit: June 30, 2018, 06:18:34 am by Zwoosh_bosh »
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Re: [wip] A Tragic home for a doll

Reply #4 on: June 30, 2018, 07:21:43 am
the arms change length and the pose for changing the mask is honestly too static for it to read well. try having him lean into the new mask so there's more movement topside perhaps?

and try that color transition thing, the shrinking body isn't quite working
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Re: [wip] A Tragic home for a doll

Reply #5 on: July 01, 2018, 08:40:11 pm
New 53 frames Old 41 frames
I love the new one so much  ;D but what do you guy's think before i do the other's. I tried the transition to light but it made the animation to flashy for a dark theme.
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Re: [wip] A Tragic home for a doll

Reply #6 on: July 03, 2018, 12:10:31 pm
looking a lot more Dynamic, for sure. it feels like they are doing it from behind though since that outfit shifts so dramatically before popping up into the mask
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Re: [wip] A Tragic home for a doll

Reply #7 on: July 05, 2018, 06:39:20 am
Tah dah and an ending total of 60 frame's and 9 frames per second.
I Love how this one look's best one out of all off them.
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Re: [wip] A Tragic home for a doll

Reply #8 on: July 09, 2018, 06:48:15 am

This is a map [wip]. I like where it's going but i'm not to sure about the fog like shading. I would like it to be creepy and onimus. but i'm just not getting that vibe. I'm really in a in a rut here and i don't know how to move forward.  It's in a little wagon for reference.
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Re: [wip] A Tragic home for a doll

Reply #9 on: July 09, 2018, 01:26:48 pm
Try making it darker, with the candle providing the only light that can't reach all parts of the wagon, selectively lighting up only the interesting parts. Having a solid dark-coloured background around the wagon and having the darkest shadows merge into it might help.

Also, there's nothing "little" about that wagon. Perhaps making it smaller might help you create a sense of unease via claustrophobia?