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Re: WIP-Lizardman walk-animation [C&C]

Reply #10 on: November 30, 2006, 07:00:20 pm
just a thought Killedbysuicide...
remember what I said about secondary motion?
you could apply it to the hands? (I've done a quick fudge just to show you what it could do?)
try it - ignore it... your call... other than that your good to rock!



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Re: WIP-Lizardman walk-animation [C&C]

Reply #11 on: November 30, 2006, 07:03:48 pm
That was just what I was aiming for in the first post but it failed because the arms were animated wrong!  ;D Thanks Bacca for this reminder must've forgotten it in the new version :-[

AlienQuark & Akzidenz thanks for the comments, Gonna colour it right....now ;)
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Re: WIP-Lizardman walk-animation [C&C]

Reply #12 on: December 01, 2006, 08:38:44 am
looks great
will look cooler with the background and the colors :D

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Re: *finished-Lizardman walk-animation [C&C]

Reply #13 on: December 01, 2006, 10:38:33 am
thanks Hidden Killer, it's finished now! The head and the second movement gave me some real trouble, so I did not add the second movement and I have the same basic-head in each frame..
Again IMO it looks better at 2 zoom:



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C&C appreciated
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Re: *finished-Lizardman walk-animation [C&C]

Reply #14 on: December 01, 2006, 12:17:34 pm
Bang on... buddy...

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Re: *finished-Lizardman walk-animation [C&C]

Reply #15 on: December 01, 2006, 04:53:31 pm
I started to like your animations!
Don't have any cirtis atm!
Keep it up man!

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Re: *finished-Lizardman walk-animation [C&C]

Reply #16 on: December 01, 2006, 10:49:25 pm
thanks guys, I guess when you take the time for something pays :P

Do you also think this says mockup? I think so, to be continued...

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Re: *finished-Lizardman walk-animation [C&C]

Reply #17 on: December 01, 2006, 11:02:11 pm
The coloring makes the positions of the arms and legs a bit confusing, and it's especially bad when the leg and hands overlap, if you knock out the highlight on the leg, and pull the arm a bit closer by lighting it up a bit, it might look better. Perhaps try lighter outlines on the closer parts, and darker outlines on the further ones also. Nice work so far!

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Re: *finished-Lizardman walk-animation [C&C]

Reply #18 on: December 01, 2006, 11:07:23 pm
yes, I know what you mean but didn't really know how to figure it out. I'll try what you said, thanks :lol:
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Re: *finished-Lizardman walk-animation [C&C]

Reply #19 on: December 01, 2006, 11:29:26 pm
Try upping the contrast on this guy- and eliminating at least some of the highlight colour.  :y: