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Help and critique with my dinosaur

on: June 09, 2018, 09:36:08 pm
Is he proportional and is the shading right? Do you think his fingers are too mushed together? If you have any other opinions, please let me know.



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I'm still figuring out how to use this forum, If I posted the image incorrectly please let me know how to do it properly. I can't figure it out. :huh:
« Last Edit: June 09, 2018, 09:44:58 pm by Crow »

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Re: Help and critique with my dinosaur

Reply #1 on: June 09, 2018, 09:38:47 pm
I think I messed it up, oh no. I'm not sure what to do. I checked the rules and stuff and I could find anything on how to properly post an image. Help me please.

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Re: Help and critique with my dinosaur

Reply #2 on: June 09, 2018, 09:45:45 pm
Welcome to Pixelation :) I fixed that image for you. You need the direct image link to embed it here, not the link to the imgur page.
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Re: Help and critique with my dinosaur

Reply #3 on: June 10, 2018, 07:37:06 am
i think that you pillow shaded it, look it up. you need to decide on where the lights is coming from and keep it to that.
And it feels like its a bit unbalanced, like if it will tip over, head first if it stodd like that. so maybe bend the legs a bit differently. But i lióve the detailed face, it feels alive. Make the stripe on its back not so straight, so they also feels more realistic and alive   :crazy:
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Re: Help and critique with my dinosaur

Reply #4 on: June 10, 2018, 11:30:25 am
In addition to what BasseBoi points out there are fundamental issues w/ anatomy. It would help if you told us which, but dunno what species of dino has trunk legs and a cannon body. Bone growth on head is distracting basically because these colors aren't working out. I'll drop a major edit tomorrow with more.
« Last Edit: June 10, 2018, 11:31:59 am by pistachio »

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Re: Help and critique with my dinosaur

Reply #5 on: June 10, 2018, 04:57:26 pm
Thank you all for the help so far.  :)

If you are wondering what dinosaur it is, it's a pachycephalosaurus.