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Offline Tealeaf

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Looking for Feedback - Started Today :)

on: June 01, 2018, 07:53:35 pm
Hey everyone,

I started to do pixel art today, and really enjoyed!

I wanted to share my first character, and get some feedback if possible. :)



Thanks in advance!

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Re: Looking for Feedback - Started Today :)

Reply #1 on: June 03, 2018, 10:41:34 am
A pretty good start.

Neat design, bit Toriyama-like :y:

Throw some asymmetry on that pose and light em up w/ shading and this piece will be killer. These are the main problems IMO. But look also into jaggies and AA (antialiasing). These, or really the lack of these are making it look rough and unfinished.

Old PJ tutorial covering that and more.
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