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WIP Nintendo Wii (almost done)

on: November 29, 2006, 12:54:41 am
Hello everyone.  Well heres my latest work.  A nintendo wii.  I'm still a beginner so. hahaha you got your laughs.  Tell me what you think. :)

OLD


NEW


I changed outline color and made buttons glossy and 3dish
« Last Edit: November 30, 2006, 03:36:05 am by Twizzler »

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Re: WIP Nintendo Wii (almost done)

Reply #1 on: November 29, 2006, 06:40:32 am
Theres not much to say. It hasn't gotten beyond lineart at this point and doesn't have much a of a texture. You could use lighter outliens on the buttons to have them push out more and feel closer to us. You could darken the main body colour so the highlight stands out more. this might give it a plasticy texture.

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Re: WIP Nintendo Wii (almost done)

Reply #2 on: November 29, 2006, 10:30:25 am
It doesn't look proportional to me, but I don't have any reference, so I can't tell exactly what is wrong. But try ditching the black outlines. Nintendo's latest designs are nice because they're so extremely bright and clean and easy to look at, and the black pixels all ruin it. And I might be mistaken, but I believe even the text on the Wii controller is grey rather than black? Like on the DS Lite.

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Re: WIP Nintendo Wii (almost done)

Reply #3 on: November 29, 2006, 10:49:49 am
it is grey... and the A button is clear plastic...
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Re: WIP Nintendo Wii (almost done)

Reply #4 on: November 29, 2006, 11:19:04 am
I made a shitty edit while semi intoxicated the other day for you.
I tried to show you what you needed to do to the buttons, as for the d-pad edit I did... (Don't ask)


I don't know why I made it grey.
But hopfully you can use this edit to make yours better.

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Re: WIP Nintendo Wii (almost done)

Reply #5 on: November 29, 2006, 11:27:35 am
intoxicated pixelling should be a regular activity here!
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Re: WIP Nintendo Wii (almost done)

Reply #6 on: November 30, 2006, 03:36:52 am
I made a shitty edit while semi intoxicated the other day for you.
I tried to show you what you needed to do to the buttons, as for the d-pad edit I did... (Don't ask)


I don't know why I made it grey.
But hopfully you can use this edit to make yours better.

Yea, I used your crits and made it alot better.  Check out the new version.

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Re: WIP Nintendo Wii (almost done)

Reply #7 on: December 01, 2006, 12:09:02 am
It looks pretty good, the buttons look nice... but the rest look dull...
Perhaps add some sort of shine to it?
Or mayby it's just me... I like shinys XD

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Re: WIP Nintendo Wii (almost done)

Reply #8 on: December 01, 2006, 08:57:23 am
somehow I like the old one better o_O
the new looks to blurry in my eyes :D
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