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Offline the_x_factor

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Small tree

on: November 28, 2006, 05:02:22 pm
First try at a tree or anything like it.




Any tips to make it better?
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Offline Gunne

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Re: Small tree

Reply #1 on: November 28, 2006, 05:04:39 pm
Everytime I see a tree lately I get a Deja-vu feeling :P

Looks good, although it looks rather flat, try some high contrasted colors for highlights with some yellow and blue in it..

Do it like Bob Rohs ;)
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Re: Small tree

Reply #2 on: November 28, 2006, 05:06:13 pm
Try a little thicker around the bottem, and fix that little indent in the side... I like the colours though... although... yeah flat... but under the leaves you should put in the trees natural colours. add some branches where the white spots are...
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Re: Small tree

Reply #3 on: November 28, 2006, 06:21:47 pm
I was gonna say... I'm getting a strange sense of deja vu...

Quote from: baccaman21 on November 28, 2006, 10:20:51 am
see my comment in this post

good luck.
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