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Offline SCiDT

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Re: [WIP] Molly the Mollusc

Reply #10 on: November 24, 2006, 06:08:06 pm
This is one of the best works I've ever seen!

Great work, I hope to see many more like these, I hope to make some of these!

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Re: [WIP] Molly the Mollusc

Reply #11 on: November 24, 2006, 06:35:43 pm
Lelle:
I'm obviously not understanding you. The only thing that really should be shadowed is the right arm by the head/torso. An edit might help clarify.

I will try to explain it more clear.

If you look at the chain on the flail itīs easy to see the light is coming from the upper left. Though on the rope for the banner itīs coming from the right, while it seem to come from almost the top on the metal ball hanging from the rope. Then on the spikes on the shell the light is coming from different places on each of the spikes. And what I meant with casting a shadow is that each of the spikes would cast a small shadow onto the shell.
Small things that would make the piece even better :]

Cheers,

Lelle

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Re: [WIP] Molly the Mollusc

Reply #12 on: November 29, 2006, 09:38:05 am
looking great so far
just do a lil AA on the thing and the lineart wont look jagged anymore :)
also add a lil more blood :D

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Re: [WIP] Molly the Mollusc

Reply #13 on: December 01, 2006, 05:29:21 am
EyeCraft: The thing on its wrist is meant to be the rescue thong of the flail.

Muted the highlight on the flag.
Tried to consolidate the specular highlight on the metal and shading on the rope into a single more vertical source.
Tried to dejaggify the shaft of the escargots fork.
Used the free colour to add another flesh shade.
Defined edges of tentacles against shadowed area.

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Re: [WIP] Molly the Mollusc

Reply #14 on: December 01, 2006, 07:03:44 am
9/10

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Re: [WIP] Molly the Mollusc

Reply #15 on: December 01, 2006, 11:10:04 am
very very nice!  :y: you make some awesome works!
in the shadows, lurking.