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on: November 28, 2006, 03:50:03 am


A whole lotta colors, and a whole lotta of time went into this.

What do you think?
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Reply #1 on: November 28, 2006, 03:57:01 am
hah, whole lot of 18 colors. love the torso, but the arms and legs dont do it for me. call me old fasion, but i like my mechs/robotic beings with long arms and long long long legs. the technical skill of the arm and legs itself is fine though.

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Reply #2 on: November 28, 2006, 06:28:07 am
Ooh, I like. The whole thing looks quite bright though... Not sure if you can fix that though, it's probably just how you placed the colors.

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Reply #3 on: November 28, 2006, 09:16:14 am
I like it except for the two cracks. I think they look wrong for some reason.
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Reply #4 on: November 28, 2006, 03:52:17 pm
Ryumaru: That's what I always invision for my robots, long arms and long legs. I felt like breaking out of the expected, and going in a different direction. And yeah 18 colors isn't that much is it.

Ceddo: It is kind of bright, I think it needs a little more contrast. I'll probably go back and change that.

Sharprm: I don't understand what makes them look wrong. Help me?
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Reply #5 on: November 28, 2006, 05:04:28 pm
Heya,

Its right arm looks like itīs its left arm drawn from behind since It isnīt bending like on a humanoid but instead like it would do an a cat or a dog, maybe this is in the design though? Also, from which way are the light coming from? It looks like different parts are lighted in different ways, only slightly though.

A very nice piece, especially like the head :]

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Reply #6 on: November 28, 2006, 06:19:46 pm
looks awesome.  the arms look too feeble though.  give him big gun-arms and it will be even better.

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Reply #7 on: November 28, 2006, 07:00:10 pm
I agree with what Leel said, it looks like it's bending towards us instead of away like it logically should (well, I suppose it doesn't need to bend away, it just looks weird, personal preference, if you will).
I'd drop the cracks, because they look more like just a cluttered mistake to me, and the legs look weird, just because they bulge out so much. Other than that I don't see anything, it's really well done, I'd say.
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Reply #8 on: November 28, 2006, 07:06:55 pm
nice, me likes..
It needs some little people fixing him up.. or something.
Yeah the hips look really bulged out..
the colors work well i think, and the face detail is funny, kinda makes me imagine a person inside it.

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Reply #9 on: November 29, 2006, 03:31:31 am
Lelle: The light source is basically, from the front.

Feron: If everybody wants bigger arms, i guess i have to deliver.

CrematedPumpkin: I  noticed that too, this will be fixed with the bigger arms.

Kon: You're the second person to mention the person inside of it idea, kind of makes me wish I was good at animation.

Thanks for the comments guys, i'll try to fix it up when I have some time.
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