AuthorTopic: [CC] Baby with his guide rabbit. Concept art for game idea I have in mind  (Read 466 times)

Offline Hoogo

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Hello fellow pixel people!
Here's a concept character for a game I may make in the future.



It's a baby with his guide rabbit. He never goes anywhere without him,
the rabbit always leads the way. The toy in the baby's hand is his weapon,
I'll later animate it. It can transform the rabbit into a fearsome wererabbit
and can cast spells to slow down and annoy his owner's enemies.

Please tell me what you think about it in general.
Any criticism is welcome and I thank you in advance for it!

Regards.

Hoogo.
« Last Edit: May 12, 2018, 12:59:46 pm by Hoogo »

Offline nissouma55

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The side view of the baby looks like he has a flat head, it looks kinda weird.
But when you did the back view, the way you shaded the head made it look like its indeed round...
I suggest making the head larger in the side view, and then playing a bit with shading to give it the shape you want.
Maybe something like this :
« Last Edit: May 12, 2018, 01:18:58 pm by nissouma55 »

Offline Hoogo

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I can see where you're coming from about the head.
I was actually giving him a flat head on purpose I think it looks weird but
cartoonish as well. Plus I think it'll look great when the pacifier will be animated
it will emphasise the shape of the head.

However I agree on the shading on the back of the head. It does look round.
I tried to fix it, how do you think that looks?

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Here's what I mean about the pacifier animation:

Offline Zanorin

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The way the baby's chin / bottom side of the face is shaded looks really weird to me, looks like he has a 3 day beard x)
Half a noob figuring out stuff.

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I Agree! This is why I changed it again, let me know what you think. I moved the eyes too, their height wasn't matching on all angles.

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Yep the beard part looks way better !
Half a noob figuring out stuff.

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Haha "beard". Thanks by the way!