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Re: WIP: Motel Scene (Looking for criticism)

Reply #20 on: May 02, 2018, 02:59:18 pm
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were is the hotel manager with with the keys

That would be inside, first floor, first door on the right (the one with the mat).

*I removed the fountain entirely and enlarged the parking lot instead. It makes a lot more sense that way.

*I added some garbage bags.

*Added a pickup truck in the parking lot.

*Started working on a realistic looking tree (still very WIP).

*Moved vegetation around.

*Added some street lights.




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Re: WIP: Motel Scene (Looking for criticism)

Reply #21 on: May 02, 2018, 11:00:06 pm
nice beautiful  :) now add some birds one stepped in the motel sign or three on population sign :y: :)

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Re: WIP: Motel Scene (Looking for criticism)

Reply #22 on: May 03, 2018, 04:36:40 am
one of the trees on the left is clipped off a bit, and the big one near the sign looks really silly with it's little puff of foliage atop such a thick stump.
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