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zombies man ... they freak me out

on: November 26, 2006, 10:09:33 pm
So I have this work in progress that I would like to share at this stage :)



Don't mind the fact that there are zombies to the left of the hero.
In the final scene it's going to be rearranged so that all zombies are to the right of the hero, staggering towards him

C+C, Edits and all that very much welcome.

Here is the wip in stages up till now.
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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out

Reply #1 on: November 26, 2006, 10:30:06 pm
The one directly to the left of the hero has no blood on his face! That's disgraceful. Heh...his face really does bug me a little, maybe because his head seems a little more detailed than the others, it seems to show more obvious features. I don't really know, but that's what sticks out to me. Otherwise it's great.
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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out

Reply #2 on: November 26, 2006, 10:30:32 pm
I think the far right zombie's head should be away from the camera.  The bat is hitting him on his left side, his head would go the other way.

It's lookin' good though.  I'd like to see some sort of background. (not creepy enough on the forums bland colours. Heh.)  ;D

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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out

Reply #3 on: November 27, 2006, 05:14:55 am
The hero's awesome. are the calves of different lengths?
The zombie being hit has really short, wide legs.
The first zombie is in mid fall? It would be just about impossible for someone to recover from that stance. His legs are also really weird.  His upper body is pretty great, though.
The second one is cool. Seems a bit bicepy for a zombie. His pants aren't as detailed as the last two, so I assume it's not done yet? Extremely short far arm and lack of an elbow, too.
The third... Not as good as the others, methinks. Dunno why though.

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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out

Reply #4 on: November 27, 2006, 11:07:16 am
O_o

WOW! I can crit, I will just say great work!

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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out

Reply #5 on: November 27, 2006, 11:30:23 am
Dead Rising much?

Looks good so far. Looking forward to seeing it finished.

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Reply #6 on: November 28, 2006, 07:03:08 am
tweaked a few things, most noticably the direction of the head being hit.
made the sluggers backleg slightly shorter (it did appear to be to long)
some colortweak to the 3rd zombie whom everyone appears to think doesn't fit in
(not only you guys)

also added in some reference to zombiemovies which I'm going to incorporate into the environment

oh and no unfortunately I don't Dead Rising at all  :'( I so wish I could play that game,
but I just can't justify buying the x360 + that game right now .... oh well maybe in the future

« Last Edit: November 28, 2006, 07:04:48 am by equinoxx »
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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out

Reply #7 on: November 28, 2006, 11:37:32 am
The way the dude is swinging his bat doesn't match up with the way the zombies face is facing. If the dude swung from right to left, the zombie's head should be at a hard left angle.

But otherwise, I love it! Nice job.

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Reply #8 on: November 28, 2006, 06:26:10 pm
OT: dead rising is nothing compared to some other 360 games.  quite fun - just a bit boring and repetiitive.

nice work - i really like the guy on the far right.

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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out

Reply #9 on: November 29, 2006, 01:41:44 am
Hooray for Shaun of the Dead! :crazy: Nice work! I like how the one zombie is holding his arm.