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Green dude

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silvir:
What better way to return to pixeling than a hunched-over, green spikey dude?



Man... I feel rusty (I'm sure it shows). I probably haven't done more than one piece since pixelation went down. Pretty bad.

Anyways, I'll take the usual harsh C+C. Thanks.

Dusty:
Hmm, the outline on the left is a little too bright and I feel it offsets it. The outlines should stay a darker colour then the piece itself, at least I feel that way. I also think some of the outline looks a little jagged, like the right arm.

Peppermint Pig:
That's cool silvir. I think the main problem is the sharpness of the image. The dark outlines of the hands especially. Use relatively shaded outlines. If your light source is from above, lines on the upper contour of a limb or body part could be lighter. Darkest color on the shoulder muscle seems dark as well. The design is otherwise solid. Detail itself is great, but too much contrast.

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