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[OC] [C+C] My Monsters

on: April 27, 2018, 08:38:24 pm
hi guys this are my monsters i recently created most of them are not finished they need some fix
please indicate me what lacks from my sprites and what i need to do to improve my skills (please those who have jaggies are not finished)


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Re: [OC] [C+C] My Monsters

Reply #1 on: April 27, 2018, 11:00:38 pm
Mostly? complete works.

What you got here is a bunch of disjointed doodles, there's no full scenes or even full bodies on display here, so it's kind of hard to criticize much of anything.
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Re: [OC] [C+C] My Monsters

Reply #2 on: April 28, 2018, 02:00:17 am
 :-[ sadly i'm not very good making bodies  ::) what can i only do are torsos and not so very good
so you can point me to the right direction? that was one of the reasons i joined here to lear from where i mostly lack body drawing all i do is character straight as a tall  :lol:
Example 1:Crappy tall-like body


Example 2:Missings Bodies

that why you noticed the incomplete works. :'(
almost of my works are things like ghosts or something that doesn't have hands or legs.
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Re: [OC] [C+C] My Monsters

Reply #3 on: April 28, 2018, 07:29:41 am
so do it more!

start with bits and pieces, you've got heads good enough for now so start working on shoulders and then torsos and then wastes and then legs.

practice each individual body part until you got them down you think, then move to the next!
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Re: [OC] [C+C] My Monsters

Reply #4 on: April 28, 2018, 11:08:05 pm
i started to make some torsos i made this

what you think?
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Re: [OC] [C+C] My Monsters

Reply #5 on: April 28, 2018, 11:51:35 pm
avoid the mirror tool and work from reference material. looking at a picture of a real person can make all the difference in suddenly noticing all the flaws going on.

start by looking for mad scientist costumes, seems like they would be a good fit for the design you have so far
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Re: [OC] [C+C] My Monsters

Reply #6 on: April 29, 2018, 03:29:12 am
this is my first try of a lab coat :lol:
i searched scientist lab coat and this is the crappy result:lol:
(is not a pixel art project is just as sketch)
it really sucks but i'm very happy cuz i tried :y:

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Re: [OC] [C+C] My Monsters

Reply #7 on: April 29, 2018, 06:31:42 am
definitely a huge improvement, aye?

Keep at it, it might take a bit but the more you study the more little bits will start to click for you.

Skeletons, muscle groups, figure drawing. Look at as much of those three as you can right now.
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Re: [OC] [C+C] My Monsters

Reply #8 on: April 29, 2018, 09:03:42 am
thanks the most hardest thing is learning about anatomy can you point me to something that helped you :lol:

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Re: [OC] [C+C] My Monsters

Reply #9 on: April 29, 2018, 09:57:07 am
proko on YouTube and the various art books by andrew Loomis
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