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Offline Dan

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Demonic Bunny (WIP Line art)

on: September 26, 2005, 06:51:03 pm
This is my W.I.P Rabbit what you think? Got any ideas or critique before i colour it?


I am not going to lie and say i made all of this because that would be... lying. I would call this piece a collaboration. I did the line art then pep coloured it, then i fiddled around with it to make it suit my needs and added my name. ;) Thanks Pep!



Any more critique wont go a miss!

Thank you,

Dan
« Last Edit: September 29, 2005, 07:16:51 am by Dan »
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Re: Demonic Bunny (WIP Line art)

Reply #1 on: September 26, 2005, 07:27:56 pm
It looks good and it looks like the bunny from Donnie Darko.

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Re: Demonic Bunny (WIP Line art)

Reply #2 on: September 27, 2005, 01:01:36 am
A few things - the left ear. Is looking wonky, you may have to fiddle with it. It goes skinny before the fold, this doesn't look very good.
Also, the arms - the upper arms are pudgy and seem to squish his bunny-boobies in as if they have some cleavage.

Other than that, it's cute, yet devilish. ;D
Can't wait to see the colouring!

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Re: Demonic Bunny (WIP Line art)

Reply #3 on: September 27, 2005, 10:20:35 pm
i think thats my only issue... do demonic bunnies have boobies?  maybe seperate the ears off the skull with a line.

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Re: Demonic Bunny (WIP Line art)

Reply #4 on: September 28, 2005, 03:23:14 pm
Haha! It's like the weird phanomanom of the crazy frogs genitals. Yes i think i will be removing the bunny's breast but on the other hand they might add a bit more character. Thanks for all the comments guys ;)

Thank you,

Dan
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