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Offline BlackVigt

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My first post I would like to have feedback

on: March 19, 2018, 10:09:08 am
Hello everyone! A little while ago I picked pixel art (and to some extent game dev) as a hobby and Ive been having a lot of fun, this is my first post here and I can see that there are plenty of people with great talent so any critique you have would be really appreciated.

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Re: My first post I would like to have feedback

Reply #1 on: March 19, 2018, 10:51:48 am
Hi and welcome! This is a fun and well-made character, in good colors. The animation gives a bit of life, it's not very complex but there's only so much you can do with only 3 frames.
At this point I would do other characters. Some body parts of this one are criticizable, but they are very dark anyway, so improvement would not be very noticeable. It's a pity the belt is not very visible as it's really well done, but I suppose it's meant to be an integrated part of this dark clothing.
The AD&D bestiary is full of very interesting creatures!

edit : Just found the reference, from the 3.5 monster manual

It's very interesting for people to see the robe folds that you wanted to represent.
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Re: My first post I would like to have feedback

Reply #2 on: March 19, 2018, 01:41:41 pm
Thank you! Indeed, thats the reference I used but the colors are from another creature, the Moon Lord from Terraria, I thought they would mix well.