Homoousios

[Railslave]

A C64 compo picture that has some pretty obvious flaws to me (due to how I tend to rush stuff near the end no doubt), but maybe some things I have over looked/am not even aware of at my level that might help me in the future.

Ptoing has been advising me with an emphasis on polishing stuff more but it would be cool to get some fresh eyes; perhaps bring up a fresh set of future challenges.

[MysteryMeat]

busted image link there lad

[Railslave]

You cannot see it ?

[Curly]

It works fine for me.

[Railslave]

This might have been a mistake to post as its a done deal, just wanted some feedback and things to consider for the future, but I understand that's not the best use of the forum, sorry 

[Curly]

I'm not familiar with C64 stuff and I'm not too sure what's going on in the image.
The only thing that bothers me is the dark gray line in the highlighted part and the shape of the bigger patch(?) of water for some reason.