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Offline Ar

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[WIP] Some smiles need critics.

on: November 19, 2006, 04:46:04 pm
Hi all! My first post on Pixelation.

I made some emoticons for forum/ website use and I need yours suggestions to improve them.
8 base colors and sometimes next 4 for elements like tongue or water drop.

What I have:


And animations:
Spining
Bouncing eye

C+C are welcome.
Sorry for my 'English'.

Ar.
Every pixel is important.

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Re: [WIP] Some smiles need critics.

Reply #1 on: November 19, 2006, 05:56:53 pm
Hi there, welcome to the forum. I reckon you should darken that brown you have for the mouths and eyes. Make them like a dark purple or something like that, to add a little more contrast. Otherwise theyre fine, really smooth.

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Re: [WIP] Some smiles need critics.

Reply #2 on: November 20, 2006, 03:10:53 pm
Those smilies are so cute! ^_^
I really like them alot. And the animations are real smooth.

I would also suggest for the eyes and mouth to be a touch darker. Especially the eyes.

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Re: [WIP] Some smiles need critics.

Reply #3 on: November 20, 2006, 03:17:09 pm
I dunno if it is the brightness, but I've no problem with the eyes and mouth, although they may be a little darker brown..

yea, I like them :)
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