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[WIP] Some smiles need critics.
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November 19, 2006, 04:46:04 pm
Hi all! My first post on Pixelation.
I made some emoticons for forum/ website use and I need yours suggestions to improve them.
8 base colors and sometimes next 4 for elements like tongue or water drop.
What I have:
And animations:
Spining
Bouncing eye
C+C are welcome.
Sorry for my 'English'.
Ar.
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EyeCraft
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Re: [WIP] Some smiles need critics.
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November 19, 2006, 05:56:53 pm
Hi there, welcome to the forum. I reckon you should darken that brown you have for the mouths and eyes. Make them like a dark purple or something like that, to add a little more contrast. Otherwise theyre fine, really smooth.
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Re: [WIP] Some smiles need critics.
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November 20, 2006, 03:10:53 pm
Those smilies are so cute! ^_^
I really like them alot. And the animations are real smooth.
I would also suggest for the eyes and mouth to be a touch darker. Especially the eyes.
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Gunne
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hello..
Re: [WIP] Some smiles need critics.
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November 20, 2006, 03:17:09 pm
I dunno if it is the brightness, but I've no problem with the eyes and mouth, although they may be a little darker brown..
yea, I like them
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