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Jedemy
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Re: [Feedback] My first grass tile
Reply #10 on:
February 09, 2018, 04:21:06 pm
Hello!
Quick update on the current scene(Still WIP). I've been working on it for quite sometime now. Here is how it looks. Feedback is appreciated!
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Zanorin
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Re: [Feedback] My first grass tile
Reply #11 on:
February 09, 2018, 05:01:32 pm
Looks quite nice
However I think the little blue monster's angle is at odds with the general top-down view, it looks like it was taken from a side-scroller, don't know if you get what I mean and if anyone agrees with me though.
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Jedemy
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Re: [Feedback] My first grass tile
Reply #12 on:
February 09, 2018, 05:12:38 pm
Glad you like it!
Yeah i know what you mean. Actually all characters has the same angle but since blue guy doesn't cast any shadow , it looks kind of weird. I will be tweaking some of those issues. Thanks for pointing that out!
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Zanorin
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Re: [Feedback] My first grass tile
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February 09, 2018, 05:29:45 pm
The absence of shadow isn't the problem imho, what bothers me is that its camera-front and back limbs end on a same horizontal line:
What you could do is make the back limbs end a little higher than the front ones.
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