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Offline namelessshadow

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[FEEDBACK] Skeleton on fire

on: January 17, 2018, 03:11:04 am
It was difficult for me to draw the ribcage since every thing is very close by, but here is the finished product.



Please feel free to critique it or suggest way to improve it.

Thanks in advance
« Last Edit: January 17, 2018, 03:13:16 am by namelessshadow »

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Re: [FEEDBACK] Skeleton on fire

Reply #1 on: January 17, 2018, 03:25:49 am
i would suggest making the ribcage much smaller, longer, and ovular. plus adding a nose hole and make your gray shade darker. right now your shading is sort of everywhere so it might help to pick a lightsource and shade as if it was directly hitting the skeleton.

A ribcage is smaller than the width of shoulder bones and almost the length of the hip bone.
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Skeleton on fire

Reply #2 on: January 23, 2018, 02:56:54 am
Thanks Teeth for the reference image. Let me go ahead and try it. ;D