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Offline Afelium

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Tiny tank/cannon thing

on: November 30, 2017, 07:15:44 pm
I'm back with this little piece,looking for critique.
which palette is better in your opinion?

do you know what's the name of the type of tank that inspired me?
edit:
found out it may be have been inspired by the Bison(or sturmpanzer I)

I feel like it's not complete yet,but I'd like to have some feedback before going further
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Re: Tiny tank/cannon thing

Reply #1 on: November 30, 2017, 10:35:41 pm
The second one :)

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Re: Tiny tank/cannon thing

Reply #2 on: November 30, 2017, 10:40:59 pm
Both look good, i prefer the first one, but i'd choose the one that looks best in your environment

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Re: Tiny tank/cannon thing

Reply #3 on: December 02, 2017, 09:19:34 pm
Can you give me some advice about how and where to use dithering?do you think It's necessary?

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Re: Tiny tank/cannon thing

Reply #4 on: December 02, 2017, 10:41:31 pm
I don't think there's any room for dithering there. You'd just end up losing your tiny details.

I think I prefer the lighter colouring, but I think the shadow colour should be a little darker. It contrasts too little with the light side, and too much with the door outline.

I'm confused by the door. Why does it rise above the body of the tank? Why does the outline continue on above, as well? Is the outline a physical object?