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Offline Molemen Everywhere

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Seris Pixel Art (Need Critique pls)

on: November 21, 2017, 01:13:31 am
So I've been playing this game called 'Paladins' quite a bit recently, and I decided to try some pixel art of a character called Seris.
I can tell that there is obvious imperfections, I would like critique on it. Thanks.
(I didn't make it exactly like the reference image on purpose)

My pixel art:



Reference Imaged that I used:

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Re: Seris Pixel Art (Need Critique pls)

Reply #1 on: November 21, 2017, 02:06:30 am
You may want to avoid an outline for the cloth pattern. It will fir better as part of the cloth surface.

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Re: Seris Pixel Art (Need Critique pls)

Reply #2 on: November 21, 2017, 02:26:31 am
You may want to avoid an outline for the cloth pattern. It will fir better as part of the cloth surface.
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Re: Seris Pixel Art (Need Critique pls)

Reply #3 on: November 21, 2017, 02:29:04 am
Typo. They meant "fit".

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Re: Seris Pixel Art (Need Critique pls)

Reply #4 on: November 21, 2017, 02:43:31 am
You may want to avoid an outline for the cloth pattern. It will fir better as part of the cloth surface.
What do you suggest to change with it? I don't think it looks very improved by this.

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Re: Seris Pixel Art (Need Critique pls)

Reply #5 on: November 23, 2017, 04:49:42 pm
You are using pillow shadong which gives incorrect lighing. I reccomend shading from a light source. You can see what I'm talking about here: https://m.imgur.com/SMDVCsx