AuthorTopic: Need help/constrictive feedback on Logo-art  (Read 1445 times)

Offline potetlaug

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Need help/constrictive feedback on Logo-art

on: November 09, 2017, 01:51:14 pm
Hi!

We are currently working on a short film and really can't get this logo to work.
We are pretty happy with the heart now, but the font is not quite there yet.
It all just seems a bit flat and not-very-grand...

ANY help, comments or constructive criticism would be greatly appriciated!



Thank you so much in advance!


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Re: Need help/constrictive feedback on Logo-art

Reply #1 on: December 07, 2017, 07:05:10 am
the flatness mainly because the heart has more contrast than the text, so up the text contrast.
text probably should get the fat outline like the heart has too.
the outline on the heart looks like straight from layer effect so u should edit it by hand to make it more consistent.

the text has hardcore jaggies which are more pronounced by the banding (dim blue outline).
u rly need some AA to smooth it out, adding 2 colours should do it.