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Little Witch Critique

on: October 31, 2017, 04:01:48 am
My daughter saw me working on pixel art and asked if I could make her a video game character. This is my attempt, an idle state, a fire state with her with a wand, and a hurt state after she takes a hit. Please let me know what you guys think. Thank you!

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Re: Little Witch Critique

Reply #1 on: November 09, 2017, 08:32:55 pm
Something needs to be done about her skin and hair colour, imho. At the moment they're both very close to each other (and also very close to the background colour), making the whole hard to read.

I'd encourage you to change the pose more between the three different states in he game, like having her 'plunging' a little bit when firing and having her hat and legs show a "shocked!" state when hit (as in a comic).