[WIP] Something feminine

[Player1]

Need help/advice with their heads especially. And with nearly everything else to be honest:)

So, this is supposed to be same girl
Here

here

and walking animation


Sources:
For big image http://slil.ru/23364828
and for animation http://slil.ru/23364831

[djork]

The walking animation just needs a touch of bounce... (to the whole thing, pervs!)  Imagine the top of her head making a sine wave as she walks along.

[Player1]

I tried:( But even 1 pixel of bounce was too bouncy.

[Gunne]

I did I little edit on the face, I now moves a little

[Pawige]

Well, it's far from perfect and she's got a bit much bounce in the chesticle region, but here's a quick edit for you. I hope it helps some!

[Player1]

I did I little edit on the face, I now moves a little

Thanks for effort, but I think it just became even more bizarre, then was

Well, it's far from perfect and she's got a bit much bounce in the chesticle region, but here's a quick edit for you. I hope it helps some!

Thanks, that really looks better. So, lessons are: don't use outlines when there are more of them then of the rest of the picture, and use hair and breasts bounce to compliment body bounce?

[Pawige]

Well, often the more secondary animations you can squeeze in, the more alive it seems. And as for the outlines, I just thought she looked better without them, you can usually get away with outlines on smaller pieces like this if you're careful.

Oh, a couple crits for the larger version, her head is a bit small, and her arms are in a rather stiff position. Try putting your hands up like that and see if it feels natural, then go to a mirror and act as if you're holding a sword and a shield and draw that.

[Player1]

You are right, her pose is as wrong as it anatomically possible.
I tried to fix it, but it seems that I chose wrong perspective from start (frontal instead 3/4), so only way to really make it right is to redraw every pixel.
This picture, though anatomically/perspective wrong, seems more right than original:)

[Player1]

Here, same character, but more chibish Metal Slug palette used.