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Re: Critique for Mushroom Monster

Reply #10 on: September 24, 2017, 10:09:21 pm
Okay then, it seems I'm not quite as finished with it as I'd hoped I'd be.
Seeing as these are points I can (relatively) easily improve upon.
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Okay..  not sure if I've made it worse or a lot better, but I took a slightly different approach to the arms now, making them a bit more like arms and less like dangly root-threads.

Did that work out? Also darkened the shadows a bit and did some AA
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Re: Critique for Mushroom Monster

Reply #11 on: September 26, 2017, 08:19:50 am
w00t!

Looking really good there man! Great job! -- I'd call that a finished piece, except the (his left) leg (thigh) is still too hidden behind his arm (but just a little!), so give it a little more volume on the front of his thigh to show a little more surface area in the light so that it doesn't blend so much with his arm and make it look like it is actually there and he has a thigh and leg (otherwise, at first glance, the arm looks like his leg). It's *just* about there though! -- looking great otherwise!

Nice stuff man. ^___^
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Re: Critique for Mushroom Monster

Reply #12 on: September 27, 2017, 08:18:04 am
I tried to address that final issue and I think I will call it finished now, I quite like how it turned out.
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Re: Critique for Mushroom Monster

Reply #13 on: September 27, 2017, 08:40:55 am
Looks finished to me! :D

-- Nice job!
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