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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #10 on: September 03, 2017, 03:08:49 pm
This is just my view on it and you can change it if it helps but with the re-boxed, I did those areas

That area feels like a flat plane compare to the bottom of the bridge and boat as doesn't show the depth on the top of the bridge,
if you can see it.

Overall, it's lovely and I hope can fix those perspective errors, can't wait to see the final piece.
Thank you very much for the advice.At the moment I'm working on the mobile phone and I'm not very comfy with it,and I think I wouldn't be able to fix those errors,so I think I'll do it when I'm back home
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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #11 on: September 03, 2017, 03:15:59 pm
All I could do on the mobile phone was finishing this carriage but I think I rushed it a bit

I'll put it on the right part of the bridge
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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #12 on: September 04, 2017, 04:30:34 pm
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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #13 on: September 04, 2017, 06:41:25 pm
This is just my view on it and you can change it if it helps but with the re-boxed, I did those areas

That area feels like a flat plane compare to the bottom of the bridge and boat as doesn't show the depth on the top of the bridge,
if you can see it.

Overall, it's lovely and I hope can fix those perspective errors, can't wait to see the final piece.
I tried to fix that but I don't know if that's what you meant.I slightly moved the street lights to the left and fixed the light on the border of the bridge
« Last Edit: September 04, 2017, 06:47:03 pm by Afelium »

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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #14 on: September 04, 2017, 06:51:43 pm

This is what I  kinda meant, cause how you have the bridge atm. You would see a bit of the handrail on the other side of it

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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #15 on: September 04, 2017, 06:56:46 pm

This is what I  kinda meant, cause how you have the bridge atm. You would see a bit of the handrail on the other side of it
Thank you, I think I understood now.I'll fix that when I have some time.I'd like to know what do you think of the carriage:is it good?

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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #16 on: September 10, 2017, 09:25:24 am

Don't know how to make water,do you know some good tutorials?

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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #17 on: September 10, 2017, 10:35:42 am
Well I can show you the images that can help you with it.







I think it will help you. Who know ;D

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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #18 on: September 10, 2017, 11:32:07 am
Well I can show you the images that can help you with it.







I think it will help you. Who know ;D
thx for the refs.I'd like to know what do you think about the carriage and the last edit

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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #19 on: September 10, 2017, 02:42:46 pm
The carriage looks great but I guess it will get some updates (lightning updates of course) because the lamps have got equal spacing and there is a space between carriage