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Offline Afelium

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Bridge at midnight[WIP]

on: September 01, 2017, 01:19:47 pm
Here's a pixel art with the same palette as this one I made before(https://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=23438.msg189342#msg189342)

as always,looking for advice

the bricks under the arch are a bit shiny because I wnated them to seem wet,don't know if it worked
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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #1 on: September 01, 2017, 01:35:04 pm
I'll fix the shadows to match the streetlights and add the water later

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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #2 on: September 01, 2017, 02:17:10 pm
In my opinion I guess you can add more bricks on the bridge (this shadow side) because you know It looks more like a painted bridge

And 1 question about the latarns on the bridge (they are on or off)
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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #3 on: September 01, 2017, 02:39:03 pm
In my opinion I guess you can add more bricks on the bridge (this shadow side) because you know It looks more like a painted bridge
Should I  also add bigger bricks here and there?

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And 1 question about the latarns on the bridge (they are on or off)
They are on.Should I make them glow white?

Thanks for the advice
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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #4 on: September 01, 2017, 03:09:26 pm

fast edit

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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #5 on: September 01, 2017, 03:17:23 pm
Much more better ;3 But fix the latarna bitbecause the left side of it is lighted and right not
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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #6 on: September 01, 2017, 03:28:27 pm
Much more better ;3 But fix the latarna bitbecause the left side of it is lighted and right not
Which bit are you referring to?Can you draw an arrow pointing to it?did you mean those bits on the chains to which the lanterns are hung?

(Sorry for bad english,if there are any errors,correct me)
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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #7 on: September 01, 2017, 03:31:18 pm
ooh sorry I meant lamps on the bridge

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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #8 on: September 01, 2017, 03:48:29 pm
ooh sorry I meant lamps on the bridge
I'll fix the light on the pole when I'm back home

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Re: Bridge at midnight[WIP]

Reply #9 on: September 02, 2017, 12:42:08 am
This is just my view on it and you can change it if it helps but with the re-boxed, I did those areas

That area feels like a flat plane compare to the bottom of the bridge and boat as doesn't show the depth on the top of the bridge,
if you can see it.

Overall, it's lovely and I hope can fix those perspective errors, can't wait to see the final piece.