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Offline Kizu

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Kitchen !

on: August 29, 2017, 09:44:46 pm
Hello ! I made a gif about a kind husband who's making some food for her special one <3
Thanks for the critics !
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Re: Kitchen !

Reply #1 on: August 29, 2017, 11:06:42 pm
The table seems very low for a kitchen table. Even in Asian houses, a western-style kitchen like this would either have no table, or have a tall table.
The table also casts no shadow, only its legs do.

The counters seem to run into the corner and stop awkwardly, as if they're painted onto the wall. They should overlap the corner.

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Re: Kitchen !

Reply #2 on: August 30, 2017, 09:10:31 pm
looks awesome ^^
I like the Shading and Coloring

The Table is really small XD ^^
Im so in shame in the Moment,
why Im so bad in English now?
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Re: Kitchen !

Reply #3 on: September 04, 2017, 02:21:12 pm
Hey Kizu, I like your idea. I find it really nice when we have unusual characters in mundane situations.

This is my fist critique here so I hope it helps:
Let me tell things I think you have going for you:

-I really like the structure of the standing character.
-You are shifting hue a bit between each color value.
-You managed to keep the focus on the sleeping witch, that blue on the hat is well placed.

Here are some things that i would've done in a different way.


Hope it helps

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Re: Kitchen !

Reply #4 on: September 07, 2017, 07:06:53 pm
Thank you so much I'll make changes

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Re: Kitchen !

Reply #5 on: September 09, 2017, 02:44:14 pm
The table is small but is perfect.. Designed well

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Re: Kitchen !

Reply #6 on: September 10, 2017, 05:41:20 pm
I think the table could help correct the perspective a bit