P90&Sprite [Warning: LEGS]

[Rerg1]

I haven't abandoned my BioShock project but I'd first thought I do more human anatomy. . Helm: I have been getting some help from my teachers but you can say if I suceeded in pixeling it ( I bet there are errors).

Anyways here! It was inspired partly by Pawige Gawd your Avater is nice.


A little something I drew.
The side on is it pushing away or locomoting itself and the other one is just floating :X

[DrDerekDoctors]

Not actually a sprite, though is it? More of a scanned doodle.

Might be worth spending a little longer than sixteen seconds on a bit of art before starting another thread, no?

[Rerg1]

Wow.. your pathetic.
First the guy holding the P90 took half and hour. And the Squid took 10minutes.

[Helm]

Please don't insult people. You've been officially warned.

Onwards with the cc.

[DrDerekDoctors]

Ooh, do I get a certificate?

I honestly thought it looked like a scribble which had taken very little time and which was not deserving of posting in it's current form. I mean it's not really a sprite, is it? It's hardly pixel art, is it? I just thought that there's nothing that can really be critiqued in the image.

[Rerg1]

It a W.I.P of Pixel art. And as far as I know its been done by the PIXEL pencil  .
And who got the warning?.

[Souly]

Derek, although you have the same name as me.
I don't agree with you.

Everything begins with a sketch.
He has posted this sketch to insure what has to be done BEFORE going onto more dynamic detail.
Anyways CC....

I believe his lower torso is MUCH too long.
His stance doesn't seem that natural either.
Look in a mirror and strike the pose you're going for.
Because it's always nice to have a reference for what you're going for.

Try working on scaling his limbs to his body size.
If he's tall he'll have longer arms and legs.
If he's short vice-versa.

[DrDerekDoctors]

It a W.I.P of Pixel art. And as far as I know its been done by the PIXEL pencil  .
And who got the warning?.

Oh, I think we can safely assume it was I who was slapped with the warning.

[Rerg1]

Anything about his face and legs?. I will fix torso.
Actaully point to thet wrong part of Torso I dont't get it.
And I was going for a ready shooting pose :X

[Souly]

As I said the pose looks un-natural.
His legs look like he's limping or something.
A pose like this requires kind of a power stance.
Where the legs are separated so he has better balance and he's braced for the power of the gun's recoil.