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Offline Afelium

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My 1st background

on: August 18, 2017, 09:22:03 am
Here's my 2nd pixel art on this forum.It's not complete but how is it so far?

made using paint.net
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Re: My 1st background

Reply #1 on: August 18, 2017, 05:10:44 pm
Added details on the background

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Re: My 1st background

Reply #2 on: August 20, 2017, 04:08:11 pm
here's an update:

and here's the final(?) version:

Please reply I'm looking for critique
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Re: My 1st background

Reply #3 on: August 20, 2017, 04:15:25 pm
It's really a great pixel art ;D

Control of each pixel , details. Good job ;3 I want to create something similar in future ;3

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Re: My 1st background

Reply #4 on: August 20, 2017, 04:19:59 pm
It's really a great pixel art ;D

Control of each pixel , details. Good job ;3 I want to create something similar in future ;3
Thank you very much. Im not sure about the shading of the pot on the right,what do you think of it?
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Re: My 1st background

Reply #5 on: August 20, 2017, 04:33:42 pm
Well about i want to talk about the highlight first because the source of light is on the middle made by moon but the left side is highlighted but right no.About the pot on the right side and his shading is really good oh and i think that window border are on the right side are highlighted on right but the source of light is on the left from them same think is the left side with this window border

Waiting forward for your opinion ;3

Xenon

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Re: My 1st background

Reply #6 on: August 20, 2017, 05:10:42 pm
You're right.I'll fix that

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Re: My 1st background

Reply #7 on: August 20, 2017, 07:20:29 pm
I'm looking forward for your next edit

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Re: My 1st background

Reply #8 on: August 20, 2017, 08:33:40 pm
here it is

I also added a picture on the right wall,but I don't like it very much;should I remove it?
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Re: My 1st background

Reply #9 on: August 20, 2017, 08:53:40 pm
Hmmm about a picture I think that single picture doesn't fit well maybe give more pictures some circular border,square border,cat picture,big picture  oh and I forgot to add that the windows with lighted version look more better than the not lighted becaause the lighted version got 2 layers and not lightdr version doesn't have it (it look a little bit jaggy) Oh and back to those pictures do you remember this Harry Potter corridors ? (many of pictures) try to experiment with it or give some other furnitures like Oil latarns with orange and yellow light or Wardrobe that cover a part of window.



Looking forward for your next edit ;3

Xenon

PS. Sorry for my english ;D It's not that great
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