Mini bear

[Bearbear65]

Hello
I made a new type of bear it's a lot smaller and I tried my best at it I used a limited amount of colors (Arne16)
I tried to make walking animations too it's my first time doing it so I don't know if I went well
I'm open to criticism and I want you to criticize everything as possible
I really want to improve 

(I also made an astronaut but didn't make the walking animations yet)

[Bearbear65]

I made a rocket for the bear too
But I think I may have used too much colors or shades of Gray 
What do you think I should do to improve?

[Bearbear65]

Maybe I used too much cross things on the rocket

[Quake]

I definitely think the spaceship could just some blocked colours, rather than dithering (the cross things you mentioned).

Also, try to visualise how a shape is formed. eg. the form of the cone on the top of the rocket is similar to a triangle, and so the shading would follow that shape



Block some colours out, feel the form of the shapes and get that finalised before adding dithering etc.

[Bearbear65]

Thank you
Does this look better?
I looked up at cylinder shadows should I use dithering for cylinders
Some people use dithering and some don't
When should I use dithering actually?

[Bearbear65]

What should I do to the roof of the rocket does it need a shadow?