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Offline Bearbear65

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Mini bear

on: July 22, 2017, 04:55:42 am
Hello
I made a new type of bear it's a lot smaller and I tried my best at it I used a limited amount of colors (Arne16)
I tried to make walking animations too it's my first time doing it so I don't know if I went well
I'm open to criticism and I want you to criticize everything as possible
I really want to improve  :)

(I also made an astronaut but didn't make the walking animations yet)

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Re: Mini bear

Reply #1 on: July 22, 2017, 11:57:17 am
I made a rocket for the bear too
But I think I may have used too much colors or shades of Gray  :( ???
What do you think I should do to improve?

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Re: Mini bear

Reply #2 on: July 23, 2017, 01:07:53 pm
Maybe I used too much cross things on the rocket ???

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Re: Mini bear

Reply #3 on: July 23, 2017, 01:26:10 pm
I definitely think the spaceship could just some blocked colours, rather than dithering (the cross things you mentioned).

Also, try to visualise how a shape is formed. eg. the form of the cone on the top of the rocket is similar to a triangle, and so the shading would follow that shape



Block some colours out, feel the form of the shapes and get that finalised before adding dithering etc.

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Re: Mini bear

Reply #4 on: July 24, 2017, 04:24:08 am
Thank you
Does this look better?
I looked up at cylinder shadows should I use dithering for cylinders
Some people use dithering and some don't
When should I use dithering actually?


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Re: Mini bear

Reply #5 on: July 25, 2017, 11:01:48 am
What should I do to the roof of the rocket does it need a shadow?