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Offline Frychiko

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Re: My own lil' Comic

Reply #10 on: October 29, 2006, 01:22:46 am
The guy drinks the experiment which is a potion?
What's the 'BOOM' (explosion) for?
And I guess he changed into something other than a human in the end?????

If your monitor is affecting your AA ability then I suggest getting some glasses.



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Re: My own lil' Comic

Reply #11 on: October 29, 2006, 05:39:32 am
1st cell: ninja stands next to the doorthat says lab A
2nd cell: Scientist says The expirament is perfect.
3rd cell: *ninja busts in and scientist trips acidently tipping over the cemicals and drinking them.
4th cell: Scientist turn into a monster and ninja says Uh... sorry.
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Re: My own lil' Comic

Reply #12 on: October 29, 2006, 06:34:29 am
don't just tell us, you have to make it more readable in the comic
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Re: My own lil' Comic

Reply #13 on: October 29, 2006, 01:04:49 pm
Quote from: I Am Uh on October 29, 2006, 05:39:32 am
1st cell: ninja stands next to the doorthat says lab A
2nd cell: Scientist says The expirament is perfect.
3rd cell: *ninja busts in and scientist trips acidently tipping over the cemicals and drinking them.
4th cell: Scientist turn into a monster and ninja says Uh... sorry.

Yea thats tottaly plausible... :'(
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Re: My own lil' Comic

Reply #14 on: October 29, 2006, 03:32:44 pm
One Mega Flaw with this: Ninja's aren't stupid.
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Re: My own lil' Comic

Reply #15 on: October 29, 2006, 04:28:01 pm
Quote from: Skull on October 29, 2006, 03:32:44 pm
One Mega Flaw with this: Ninja's aren't stupid.

Tbh i don't think that's an issue.

I think the major flaw is that you're confining yourself so much with your canvas - it just looks messy, especially with that blurry AA and squished text.
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