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Bio Shock

on: October 28, 2006, 09:23:07 pm
Starting Pixel Art again.
Choosing one of the bad guys of a new coming game called "Bio Shock".
It is a Underwater Utophain Society and well is based in the 1960's. It is a darn interesting game and I'm thinking about buying it.
Anyway here is my Line Art. I wanted some help from the beggininng to the end.

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #1 on: October 28, 2006, 09:24:03 pm
Woah, looks like paper and pencil. I suggest you finish it cause there really isnt anything to CnC

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #2 on: October 28, 2006, 09:25:45 pm
There is nothing to crit. Rethink the progress of the art before you post next time, as all we can do is wait for an update.
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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #3 on: October 28, 2006, 09:37:16 pm
Okay. Small Update. I think Im gonna go with dithering and a mixed colour version.
I need to have some stronger oranges and a differnt yellow :S.
Update will be tommorow.

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #4 on: October 28, 2006, 10:00:13 pm
You should add some faded reds and bright peaches.

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #5 on: October 28, 2006, 11:03:09 pm


Small edit, i don't know if it will help or not but it was fun  :)

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #6 on: October 29, 2006, 01:21:33 am
...? What is that?

Is it supposed to be a protector? Because if so your drawing is way too small for that picture or the head is way out of proportion of normal. They have deep-diving suit style things, there heads look huge.
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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #7 on: October 29, 2006, 09:01:48 am

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #8 on: October 29, 2006, 09:31:25 am
How about you atleast sketch the whole thing before starting to colour/shade it?

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #9 on: October 29, 2006, 10:53:45 am
Exactly... (Shit -.- )

But when I sketch its to big and I cant accrautly resize it probally.
I might try to sketch this one.

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #10 on: October 29, 2006, 07:29:12 pm
What? Why do you need to resize it? Pixel all the lines then once you get them nice and clean and good, start coloring.

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #11 on: October 29, 2006, 08:02:33 pm
I hate doing big peices of art.
I dont like ubder small but I want to put in maximum detail in the smallest sizes possible.  :-X

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #12 on: October 29, 2006, 08:13:44 pm
What do you consider "big?"
I think you should define a set canvas size before you start pixeling, then sketch it out to make sure everything fits where it should, clean up the lines, and then move on to coloring, then shading, then final refinement.

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #13 on: October 29, 2006, 08:26:10 pm
I started a new 60's Divers helmet.

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #14 on: October 29, 2006, 08:31:00 pm
See! Right there! Like that! You started shading without finishing the lines first! (Must say, though, that I do like the way you've done the shading with "large pixels.")

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #15 on: October 29, 2006, 11:52:05 pm
Pa-CHANG!



This is the one you made :] No problems with it for now as long as you keep it at that. Now is time for some scetching to get a sense for the whole thing. This is absogodammitlutely necessary. It could be a stick figure or a sillhouette or whatever you like, but for detail maniacs like you and me, it's a great way of just drawing out a map of possibilities; so that you when finished can go 'phew', there's the whole thing as it's gonna be. Let's fill it with details and do the fun stuff :]

That way you won't do the head and then the arms and then get disappointed when the arms look like blobs compared to the head and stick with it until the arms look nice and then give up because you don't wanna draw the legs and you can't come up with a good way to do them because if you wanna do the pose you was aiming for, you're gonna have to redo the arms and they were already finished and you like them.

You can avoid that kind of situation just with a silhouette or a stick figure. For pixel art, I prefer sillhouettes.



Like that. Since we had a reference, making the proportions weren't that hard and so.



Your original sketch was in 2 colours and that's suparr. 2 colors to define what kind of details you want or to define important parts inside the sillhouette.



And then you might arrive somewhere around here. But this is awful looking, D: I just slapped some preliminary details in there. Now one could go on with some overall colours and shading or just slack off and make all the details right.

I'm sorry for hogging your picture like this, but I thought it could be of some help. I'm a detail maniac myself and I know this can really be a great pointer.

So now go and surprise us all. I highly recommend you make a sillhouette or a stick figure and come back and show it to us. From there we can start giving you the kind of critique you'd like to hear :]

Do your best, I'll be rooting for ya.
« Last Edit: October 29, 2006, 11:54:07 pm by Jad »
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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #16 on: October 30, 2006, 11:58:10 am
.... :'(

I wub you.

Nice man. You should finish it :P.
I wanna do a similar pose like you but I think I will first try my best on it.
I'll be following yar tips.

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #17 on: October 30, 2006, 03:30:13 pm
If you think whatever you'll do will feel too similar to mine, you could always just mirror it or so, just to give your own brain some more space to work in.

I really wanna see you do a sillhouette or a stickie though :> Please try.
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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #18 on: October 30, 2006, 04:24:49 pm
C'mon, draw some legs. Maybe even some feet. Just once. You know you want to. :ouch:

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #19 on: November 01, 2006, 09:26:26 pm


Small little update. Not so much but I have a rough idea of what I want.

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #20 on: November 01, 2006, 11:40:26 pm
I think the helmet is really small now, compared to the body.
http://www.joystiq.com/media/2006/02/bioshock_xbox360.jpg
In that pic, the helmet is probably about 3/4 of his body...

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #21 on: November 02, 2006, 04:00:29 am
FEET!  :(

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Re: Bio Shock

Reply #22 on: November 02, 2006, 07:06:20 am
I think the helmet is really small now, compared to the body.
http://www.joystiq.com/media/2006/02/bioshock_xbox360.jpg
In that pic, the helmet is probably about 3/4 of his body...

Yeah I was just thinking of that. Damn. What do you suggegst I do?. I'll keep the body postion but change head or Vice Versa.