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Offline Sherman Gill

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Werewolf-bot

on: October 27, 2006, 06:40:03 pm
Made this... Probably still a WIP but you never know.
He's a robot howling (His mouth is tube-like.)

Moons above him, so thats where the light source is.
Looks best at 2x zoom, I think.
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Re: Werewolf-bot

Reply #1 on: October 27, 2006, 08:47:43 pm
I thought that maybe yours made how it is cause of the style you were going for but I edited.



The legs and arms were horrible..They looked choppy and like thick strokes.
Your colors are nice but your stance was a little off.

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Re: Werewolf-bot

Reply #2 on: October 27, 2006, 09:07:49 pm
I thought that maybe yours made how it is cause of the style you were going for but I edited.



The legs and arms were horrible..They looked choppy and like thick strokes.
Your colors are nice but your stance was a little off.

talk about harsh...you ever heard of style?

choose your words wisely next time buddy.

nice piece sherman. looks like a platform game-type character. I just think you need to try and clean his legs up a bit, but theyre not "horrible". and the feet look funny.

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Re: Werewolf-bot

Reply #3 on: October 28, 2006, 12:25:00 am
To be honest i think Victor's edit was pretty good, mainly on the legs. He gave a reason for his comment aswel, which is fine critique in my book.

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Re: Werewolf-bot

Reply #4 on: October 28, 2006, 11:25:18 am
TBH, I like the original better, needs more cleaning up on those specific parts though.
And you shouldn't have to explain anything. You having to explain where the mouth is means it's not clear enough. Maybe a drastic edit on the head lineart-wise would help.
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Offline Sherman Gill

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Re: Werewolf-bot

Reply #5 on: October 28, 2006, 08:02:22 pm
Victor's version doesn't do much for me. It makes the thing look too human.
I didn't see how he changed the mouth until now, and I think that looks better.
 But heres what I got:

Tried to clean up the legs and arms, and fix the crappy upper portion of the sky. (Not sure I did either.)
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Re: Werewolf-bot

Reply #6 on: October 28, 2006, 08:09:55 pm
Too human, in this first place how does this look like a wolf? I see no ears and no claws so you might aswell just say monster.

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Re: Werewolf-bot

Reply #7 on: October 28, 2006, 11:31:21 pm
It's howling at the moon.
I.....am......me............

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Re: Werewolf-bot

Reply #8 on: October 29, 2006, 01:07:39 am
I don't see it. It looks nothing like a howl. I see no lips. I see neither robot nor wolf. Too organic to be a bot. Too...human(?) to be a wolf.

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Re: Werewolf-bot

Reply #9 on: October 29, 2006, 01:16:05 am
Well hell guys, I just tacked the werewolf bot on there because I couldn't think of what it would be. So what do YOU think it is?

I called it a werewolf because it's howling and not exactly a human form, and a robot because the line art was done in a similar style to that of robots a guy in the line art thread did.
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