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New, Sprite C+C

on: February 23, 2017, 03:57:09 am
Hi,
This is my first post, so be gentle on me please... or be brutal (donít let me tell you how to live your life)!

Joking aside, I would like some feedback on these two sprites I have been working on:

The only real problem I have is with the second figure on the right. He has a hand placed on the top of his weapon, but it seems to blend in with the noise in his torso, making it unnoticeable. Other than that, I canít really find anything else I did wrong.

Are there any blaring mistakes Iím not catching?

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Re: New, Sprite C+C

Reply #1 on: March 02, 2017, 10:30:55 pm
You could try making him wear gloves? Maybe it would stand out more. I'm still new to pixel art so there's not anything I can see that's wrong. Great job!  :)

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Re: New, Sprite C+C

Reply #2 on: March 03, 2017, 01:08:59 am

Teased the elbow out on the bazookaman's arm, and then added a blackish outline from orangelad's neck around the hands for better visibility on both sprites!
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http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0 also go suggest on my quest, cmon
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