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Alone in the hill

on: October 20, 2006, 04:33:50 am
Hello
This is just a drawing i made today, i think i needed some fresh air...  :P

It's made in MSPaint and in a fast timing so i can make some changes later.

Good day!

P.D.: again sorry for my english (i'm from Argentina)


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Re: Alone in the hill

Reply #1 on: October 20, 2006, 04:46:11 am
Your lines and designs aren't bad, but your palettes are gutwrenching and hideous!  :D  Here is the same image, with 2 less colors - the figure needs new colors as well but I'm too lazy to edit him too :P



Your lines and ideas are nice but I think right now colors are the thing you need to work on most!

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Re: Alone in the hill

Reply #2 on: October 20, 2006, 05:02:51 am
OK Adam!! Thanks for your editing, it was really helpful.  :y:
I'll try to work most on the color, i like the way it looks now. Thanks for your time!
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Re: Alone in the hill

Reply #3 on: October 20, 2006, 06:09:24 am
My Edit:


Ok, let's start, on Adams edit he just primarily fixed your colors. I did too but in a more deep depth level. Your shading had some problems as you can see. Since the light source is hitting him from the top left (You can get that from the way your rocks are shaded) the grass should have a shade at the right. Also the clouds shold be blocking some light from getting to the grass. I tried to not use alot of colors to keep it simple but I lighted the rocks to give them some depth.

Hope you learned a bit more from this.

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Re: Alone in the hill

Reply #4 on: October 20, 2006, 01:36:05 pm
Wow, the rocks looks great now! Thanks a lot Victor