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Offline Ergo__proxy

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hello

on: February 20, 2017, 12:17:49 pm
hello everyone, im new in pixel art and i wanna learn everything for create sprite and animation for videogame.
this my first one , sorry for my poor english but im from italy :P 

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Re: hello

Reply #1 on: February 21, 2017, 04:52:40 pm
hello there.
i'm not a top expert but i would suggest to add some highlights to the tail, as i imagine its a slicky snake tail. Also the bottom part of the tail looks maybe a bit plain.
The forehead shading is also a bit off, the highlights suggest that the light comes from the top but the forehead looks dark.

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Re: hello

Reply #2 on: February 22, 2017, 09:01:16 am
Hm, well my biggest problem was the kink in his tail. It bends really sharply. A snake would slither with it's tail flat on the ground, I tried to make it look like an S-shape still



I also played with reducing the colors a bit, and I tried to make the arms the same shape. I'm not thrilled with those changes though so take it as you will.

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Re: hello

Reply #3 on: February 23, 2017, 01:23:31 am
                                                                                                                         
thakns for the help guys
i made some changes, because the tail Anatomy wasnt good.
but still have some problem with tail shadow, im working on it!