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Offline Franrek

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Re: Tree

Reply #20 on: February 01, 2017, 02:18:21 pm
Could you show me an example how to add more deph with out adding more colours? Small piece would be enough. I have no idea how to do it sorry :|

Fixed some texture and shape. That new dark colour wont stay there probably.
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Offline Runensucher

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Re: Tree

Reply #21 on: February 01, 2017, 05:50:35 pm
Could you show me an example how to add more deph with out adding more colours? Small piece would be enough. I have no idea how to do it sorry :|

That's not necessary, since you already did it. Here:


And all about your are doing the right things now. Just finish it up when you have the time. :)

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Re: Tree

Reply #22 on: February 01, 2017, 06:08:49 pm
I used another darker colour for it tho. I guess that works out :)

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Re: [WIP] Tree

Reply #23 on: February 04, 2017, 09:25:29 pm
Update, I think it's near to being completed. Thanks to everyone that helped me
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Re: [WIP] Tree

Reply #24 on: February 04, 2017, 10:39:39 pm
The issue I see here is that you made the classic mistake of spending a long time on texture details before you got feedback or self-evaluated your fundamentals (composition, shading, form, silhouette, etc.), and now that you are receiving good feedback you are unwilling to apply all of it. You will only improve slightly and your piece will always suffer because of this. I suggest you wrap it up and start a new tree, this time getting feedback along the way. I'm sure you will be much more pleased with the outcome of that next one.

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Re: [WIP] Tree

Reply #25 on: February 05, 2017, 01:21:01 am
I totally agree that I worked on it in wrong order. I still love the progress I made thanks to you guys and I think it isn't that small. I know I can make it much better but as you said I would need to start over. That's why, for now I'll keep this one as it is and do it the right way from the beggining when I have the time to do so. I would love to work on it from the start but I have much more things that I need and want to do. Sorry for disapointing you guys if I did.

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Re: [WIP] Tree

Reply #26 on: February 05, 2017, 08:09:00 am
No worries, you did make good progress given the circumstances. Please post your final piece once you've finished!