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[Newbie][Feedback] First time doing pixel art

on: January 22, 2017, 03:18:04 am
Hey.

I'm a newbie in pixel art. I have these sprites done yesterday, and I was wondering what you guys think? I like the colors, but I'm sure it needs improvement on anatomy but I just don't know how to fix it.




Any feedback is appreciated! Thanks in advance!

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Re: [Newbie][Feedback] First time doing pixel art

Reply #1 on: January 22, 2017, 05:37:02 am
I'm pretty new to pixel art as well so take my comment with a grain of salt( :lol:)

Anyways, I would say that the sprites are unreadable at 1x which is the resolution that they need to be readable at. To solve this you might want to have a preview up as you work so you can see what it looks like without zooming out so that you can verify this.

I'll say this again, I am pretty new so take what I say with a grain of salt(this is how I work now btw) ::)

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Re: [Newbie][Feedback] First time doing pixel art

Reply #2 on: January 23, 2017, 11:06:05 pm
If I may ask, what was your purpose of making these sprites?

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Re: [Newbie][Feedback] First time doing pixel art

Reply #3 on: January 24, 2017, 07:17:48 am
The anatomy depends entirely upon the style of the game. It could work in a cartoonish style. I'd recommend eliminating the jagged edges on the diagonal outline sections where you've doubled up pixels, though.

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Re: [Newbie][Feedback] First time doing pixel art

Reply #4 on: January 24, 2017, 11:03:44 am
Not exactly sure of what is wanted here but made edits, although not perfect




For reference was considering this to be the overall style it fits, or is similar to



« Last Edit: January 24, 2017, 11:16:18 am by Ma3vis »

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Re: [Newbie][Feedback] First time doing pixel art

Reply #5 on: January 28, 2017, 12:09:37 pm
Hey, I'm back.

@Ma3vis I was going for a hybrid of LiEat and Lisa: The Painful's spriting style





I also fixed some parts based on your edits. Thanks for the edits, they helped me a lot!



@Yokai90 These sprites are for a game I'm making.